So the story has gone well, if a bit... off in places. I decided I don't like the ending (sorry, Sandi) so I'll give y'all 5 sentences to wrap the whole thing up. I'll then let y'all vote for the best one, and I'll break a tie. I'll give you till Monday, when you'll vote, and I'll post the whole thing on Tuesday.
5-sentence endings go on this post.
3 days ago